Hey, like that you are really trying to get this illustration to work alongside that gorgeous logo. I gotta be honest here and say the illustration the way it exist currently is still not co-existing well with the type or logo. The Illustration seems really forced and the type alongside of the flower is still unresolved. I think it's the choice of typeface more than anything else. However, I do like the large hand at the top which is totally a reminder of your client/logo.
Let's chat on tuesday about this for sure and we'll take as long as you want. I just think you continue to push this illustration and it still does the logo an injustice.
Maybe a closer shot of the illustration without all the figure /ground in the composition....change scale and everything else might just fall into place.
It might also be the color choices in the illustration...but most importantly the client logo is lost in the bottom.
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Hey, like that you are really trying to get this illustration to work alongside that gorgeous logo. I gotta be honest here and say the illustration the way it exist currently is still not co-existing well with the type or logo.
The Illustration seems really forced and the type alongside of the flower is still unresolved. I think it's the choice of typeface more than anything else. However, I do like the large hand at the top which is totally a reminder of your client/logo.
Let's chat on tuesday about this for sure and we'll take as long as you want. I just think you continue to push this illustration and it still does the logo an injustice.
Maybe a closer shot of the illustration without all the figure /ground in the composition....change scale and everything else might just fall into place.
It might also be the color choices in the illustration...but most importantly the client logo is lost in the bottom.
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